Hi my name is Manase Vaka. I am a Year 6 student at Glenbrae Primary School.
My learning intention for this writing is to put paragraphs and capital letters in the right place.
My speaking goal is to read out loud so my audience can hear the story easily.
I hope you enjoy my movie and leave me a comment.
7 comments:
Hi Manase
We like the way that you read your story out
clearly because you made it interesting.
From Kitiona and Cisco
Hi I enjoyed listening to your movie Manase. I could hear every word you said. You have used paragraphs correctly in your writing.
Hi this is Teresa , I am a old student of Glen Brae. Your presentation was magnificent. I really enjoyed it. You have a really awesome goal for writing.
I am really thrilled with your presentation. I love your blog!
Hi Manase,
We thought your reading was awesome and you spoke very clearly. You were really confident in front of the camera and your whole presentation manner was good.
From The Squares reading group at Tamaki Primary School Rm6.
Hello Manase, well I think you exceed your speaking goal. Not only did you speak loudly enough so that I could understand you; but you also spoke very clearly.
Tim Cox
I enjoyed your story and you used great expression.
Malo e lelei, Manase
You spoke really clearly and achieved all your goals. Good on you.
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